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Zekie member
Member # Joined: 15 Jun 2001 Posts: 110 Location: Lost Angels, Calipr0nia
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 9:33 am |
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I finished this around 9am. Kinda tired. I should work on the light a little more. There isnt any good light source in the drawing.. and I think I should refine my studies in drawing profiles. I think this came out the best of the previous 3. Anyhow, I would love to hear some good critiques and comments. Sorry if the character was too repetetive... :3
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MoleculeMan member
Member # Joined: 12 Jul 2001 Posts: 324 Location: Chicago
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 10:28 pm |
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The head is really nice. I like the sharp clean lines and the beauty of the person in the picture. This is pretty solid i think .
It seems the composition or whatever breaks up near the bottom. The hands need a little work i think. They are looking a little flat, and the knuckles don't line up. The curve of the hand below the thumb is too long or something. You might just have not drawn in the seperation in them, but they could definately look better. Oh yeah the line quality doesnt seem to be as good as the head parts of the picture. |
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