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GRID member
Member # Joined: 14 Jan 2001 Posts: 70 Location: Uppsala Sweden
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 7:09 am |
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coments are welcome
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raiyu junior member
Member # Joined: 24 May 2001 Posts: 13 Location: Brooklyn
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 8:35 am |
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Haha thats real sweet, although the rims could use a little more definition, they look a bit flat. Besides that, why would the windows be broken? If it was just been sitting around in a shed I understand the rust, but the windows would fine, just dirty is all. And if they are supposed to broken, I think you have a bit too many cracks. It looks like you have three separate impact points on the windsheild, I would just stick with one, and maybe one smaller one. But having three about the same size, makes it look off.
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Cicinimo member
Member # Joined: 03 Mar 2001 Posts: 705 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 8:59 am |
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Woah, thats really cool. And so different from the way we usually see sports cars . Hey, I have no crit for you, I think it rocks. What program was this created in? |
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Shaded member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 2000 Posts: 413 Location: Toronto
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 9:58 am |
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Kickass job! I second raiyu comment about taking two of the impact webs off, and made the one the remains large, and more defined. Also, gove the car a paintjob! Ever seen those Rally cars? Perhaps something like that.
Awesome stuff anyway Keep it right up. |
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sCriBBler aka Jito member
Member # Joined: 13 Jul 2001 Posts: 74 Location: france
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 10:28 am |
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put some atmospheric dusts and u are done
it's a good work ![](images/smiles/icon_eek.gif) |
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GRID member
Member # Joined: 14 Jan 2001 Posts: 70 Location: Uppsala Sweden
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 2:01 pm |
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Glad you like it, i�m quite tired of working on this one so i�m not sure if i�ll make any of the suggestions you give
But it�s always good to hear the piont of others, you get "blind" while working on it and sometimes do not notice even the biggest erroros in pics.
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waylon member
Member # Joined: 05 Jul 2000 Posts: 762 Location: Milwaukee, WI US
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 2:28 pm |
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Hi. Looks really good, but still not quite right. I think it's a combination of a couple things.
First, the scale seems to be a little bit off. The car seems too small. I think the main factor is that the floorboard seem way too wide, but there are other little things here and there that don't quite seem to work perfectly. Adding some dust, as previously mentioned, would probably help quite a bit too, since it would tie all the elements in the scene together a little better.
The other thing is that the surface of the car doesn't look quite right. It looks more like it's made out of plaster than just painted white. I think the problem is that the surface of the car isn't at all shiny. Even though it's old and rusty, the parts where it's white should still have most of their reflectiveness intact. Add that, and it'll look a lot more realistic. |
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GRID member
Member # Joined: 14 Jan 2001 Posts: 70 Location: Uppsala Sweden
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 10:49 am |
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Waylon: i dont think i have the inspiration to work anymore on it (i posted in gallery/finished work
But i see the points youre talking about, but you say i should add more dust and still make the car paint more reflective?
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n8 member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 791 Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 8:56 pm |
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hey..i remember the car too...if i remember correctly people were arguing what the name of it was...crx del sol or sumthin??..hehe.....yeah.as waylon said, the stuff about the texture of the car n stuff..but.looks good... |
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Dryfire member
Member # Joined: 21 May 2000 Posts: 945 Location: Long Island, NY
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 8:58 pm |
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i give it a cool |
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tayete member
Member # Joined: 03 Dec 2000 Posts: 656 Location: Madrid, Spain
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 11:15 pm |
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Volumetric lights! Volumetric lights! please please please dust in the air!
And yes, it seems a bit small, but I *really* LOVE this picture. |
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kos.mandis member
Member # Joined: 14 Nov 1999 Posts: 274 Location: in front of a pc
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 11:33 pm |
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Hey I remember that car from earlier
AWESOME job man, it kicks ass!
The roof seems to have been unaffected by the passage of time though ![](images/smiles/icon_wink.gif) |
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