Sijun Forums :: View topic - Goblin. Need crit on colour, anatomy, basically everything.

S4Sb · Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 4:11 pm

Here it is.
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Thanks for your time.

It's supposed to be a concept for a 3d model.

[ June 26, 2001: Message edited by: S4Sb ]

topeira · Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 10:21 pm

images are impossible to be seen. fix this or i'm afraid, no comments will come to advise u...

unless u need an opinion on how to change the red X to a more interesting composition.

Ahcri · Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 11:15 pm

I can see the image alright. The only thing that I think needs change is the background (although you said it's a concept for a 3D model, so I guess that doesn't matter much) The background feels sort of empty, by adding some forests and clouds back in the horizon would probably help. Especially on the top-right corner, it's too empty.

synj · Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 12:12 am

em in my honest opinion with all the green orc/ogre CG things out (warcraft, shrek, monsters...) i personally would discourage yet another if you want it to pop out. i like the colored drawing alot though hehe and it could indeed have a totally different feel to it animated i spose so dont mind me i'm just blabbing

S4Sb · Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 3:25 am

Topeira: umm.. yeah thank you. Well, I'm not new here. But all the servers are shutting down their hotlinking. Maybe I find a better one again. Since this seems to have some downtimes now and then.

Ahcri: Thanks. I never did background work. Guess that is the next thing I have to approach.

Synj: thanks

I don't want it to pop out. I love those green cliche-warcraft-like things. It's just a goblin for a contest. More a practice to learn how to model. But neither shrek nor warcraft.. nor monsters have been released yet in germany.. maybe that's the reason why I'm still not fed up with it.

Thank you all for your time