[-[sargent]-]

hi guys,
what do you think of this space marine pic ive done,
thanks

[Duracel]

first of all, its too light gray without any contrast(the pencil-sketch-effect ) ..so its a little bit bad for the eyes :|
So i just leveled it up and reduced the size a bit


hmm... the guy look really flat... only the face has a shadow part... also the gun is in the profile-perspective and the hands are square.
But i think the details are good and... i dont know what u have done before and i dont know your age but this sketch has potency
Give your next work more volume

PS: uuuh, my english is sure bad ..i feel it

[mk]

damn... you change the contrast and i see this...


MK

[Sparks]

Definitely keep working on drawing hands, I know it's hard, and it's something I'm struggling with now too.

You may want to practice drawing some guns from real life that you like, just to understand the basic mechanims. The gun in the picture doesn't have anything for his right hand to be grabbing on to, any real detail on the gun, or a feasible height/width ratio

Other than that, this latest effort shows how much you're improving, so keep at it. Just remember to try to use photo reference whenever possible

[topeira]

what can i add to what was said before?...

oh, vary the thickness (weight) of your lines in your drawing. some should be heavier and some lighter so creat a more clear and understandable look. and as was said - more shading.

keep learning.