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Hunter
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 Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 4:30 am |
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I would appreciate any crits on this.
Thanks!
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Plouffe
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| Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 6:18 am |
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coool i like this... too bad not many people replied...
Hmm well your background is CRISP. done in 3d???
but your machine/dragon/monster truck or whatever it is is kinda blury/smudgy... Maybe work on him more so that he fits in better with the background... define the forms a bit more.. you know what i mean?? |
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Pringle
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| Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 7:34 am |
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Really great picture you've got there. For crit, I agree with the statement above.
Nice! |
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 1:13 pm |
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thats really good work! lets see some more  |
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dr . bang
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| Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 1:24 pm |
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I love this picture!! Nice perspective too!
Plouffe: i believe the bg is photos. |
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Prometheus-ANJ
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| Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 1:40 pm |
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| I like it, reminds me of the Megaman legends/rockman dash designs. Robots have taken over the world, huh? |
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Arain
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| Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2001 8:34 am |
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| I like it very much! |
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Hunter
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| Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2001 8:44 am |
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Thanks to everyone who replied. I guess I should have put this into the Work in Progress forum...
Plouffe, et.al.: I think I do know what your trying to say and I'll work on sharpening things up -Maybe I wasn't sure if the pict was worth bringing to that level of finish in the first place.
BurnOut: More to come soon!
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KiNgStiNg
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| Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2001 9:12 am |
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very nice perspective...and the concept is also pretty damn awesome good work so far man  |
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The
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| Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2001 4:34 pm |
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I feel small  |
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Littlepoop77
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| Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2001 11:34 pm |
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Cool, the actuators makes sence. My only suggestion would be to blur the background a bit and add a bit of atmosphere to it.
I personally would like a bit more yellow highlights and the inner part of his mouth a bit more brighter...but that's just me.
Great perspective and layout, also very dynamic. |
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autobots transform
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2001 9:12 pm |
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| THIS IS TOOOO COOL FOR THE WORDS I"M WRITING. Please finish this puppy :O |
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extension13
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| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2001 9:52 pm |
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| I agree nice composition, good colors, but the forground should be much sharper. Definately keep working on it. I really like it. |
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