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Iman
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Location: Huddersfield - London UK

PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 7:43 am     Reply with quote
I dont think ive EVER posted anything here,... I've been an information leech and.. I feel kind of guilty.

The great work I see here keeps me truly motivated! ... keep up the great work and if you have any time for this mortal... please spare a few comments for my stuff.

my tiny online sketchbook is at Online Sketchbook my digital portrait of a special girl I know over the internet is at:Portrait
your comments are much appreciated...

xxx
Iman




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Awetopsy
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Location: Kelowna

PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 8:03 am     Reply with quote
I will say your site is very interesting.. you show alot of creativity. I like that you incorporate written arts and visual arts together. nice layout too.


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dr . bang
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Location: Den Haag, Holland

PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 8:08 am     Reply with quote
I really like this piece, especillay the heart, work on it some more and give it to your gf (and prepare some tissues for her, just in case)


A suggestion though, i suggest you remove all those gradient and rectangle that is over her face and other stuff. They don't really match the picture as a whole, instead, add something more curvy, like bubbles..etc

I hope that helps


Oh yea, and Welcome to the board

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Iman
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 8:14 am     Reply with quote
Noel this is incredible, I didnt think I'd get a response from you... I have to say your site certainly inspired me to do the online sketchy thing two weeks ago. I even mentioned your site at my review session as an example of a great online sketchbook.

thanks!

Iman

ps. love the new portraits!
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Iman
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 8:28 am     Reply with quote
thanks dr. bang..

my friend already has that portrait, I sent it to her for valentines day.. but I agree about the gradient thing on her face, I wasnt too keen on it myself but I didnt quite know what else to substitute there as it looked like it needed something.
More curves I definately agree with! and bubbles would be fantastic. thanks for the suggestions, I'll bear them in mind when I do another portrait.

cheers
Iman
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