[fuddo]

I lost my prisma, and I had a deadline for this picture ( hour and a half) so some things are kind of muddled, but im happy with it.

c&c

[hamilton]

the perspective on the desk is all messed up. the lines of the drawers should be moving toward each other on the right. you've set up a three point perspective picture with only one point of perspective. hmph. the colors are cool i guess. but if the lamp is on, then the guy should be all back lit. she should basically be a shadow with a lit outlining. (which would have been REALLY cool.)