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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 2:55 pm |
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hmm still doesnt look very vibrant.. the colors need to be a little more bright.
but its looking good so far.. |
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Jezebel member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2000 Posts: 1940 Location: Mesquite, TX, US
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 3:43 pm |
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I think the way you did the leaves is very appealing... I like it a lot. It would be cool to see you try a landscape where you could do a whole bunch of trees/plants in a more interesting setting. This composition is somewhat dull I think, but technically the plant looks nice... in my eyes anyway
Beth |
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Member # Joined: 23 Mar 2000 Posts: 887 Location: USA
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 4:10 pm |
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Is English your native tounge? It's "study" not "studie".
Monet did that alot too. Experiments for tone, and color. Look at some of his stuff? |
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Pringle member
Member # Joined: 05 May 2001 Posts: 376 Location: Ontario, Canada.
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 4:40 pm |
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Thanks for your (kind) remarks. Returning to the image again, I can see there should have been alot more contrast to the colours. The composition really sucks, thats one of my weak points.
I'm from Denmark so I'm not that skilled in English, sorry  |
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Dr.Squirley member
Member # Joined: 25 Apr 2001 Posts: 219 Location: Here
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 6:09 pm |
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thats beautyfull, i love the cleaness but still "roughness" of the style. Excelent green values
( pay no attention to the man behind the spelling mistakes)
[ June 14, 2001: Message edited by: Dr.Squirley ] |
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Pringle member
Member # Joined: 05 May 2001 Posts: 376 Location: Ontario, Canada.
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 11:43 pm |
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I did this to get better to determine the colour values from real life.
Any comments?
Z.
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