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sweedberg
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 6:24 pm     Reply with quote
I was bored to death this evening.
Didn�t feel like doing ANYTHING! That sucks, so I drew this anyway, to make the minutes go...



Maybe I�ll add some cuts through it later...

Just drawn from my mind...not even a mirror as reference...whatever...

heh...ain�t I the happy bastard! =)
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swampbug
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 6:29 pm     Reply with quote
From your head? Good damn job!.. I say.. keep going with this one. Complete the face maybe?
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Gimbal8
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 7:09 pm     Reply with quote
Looks almost real. The one thing that throws it off is the way the circle of the eye seems to wrap around the eyeball itself. Not sure if I'm making any sense here but no matter. Still looks good, especially for just a time waster.
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waylon
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 3:49 am     Reply with quote
Yeah, it looks good, but not quite anatomically right. The eyeball doesn't look quite round. When you're doing your shading, keep in mind that the eye is a ball inside of a socket, peeking through a slit. That roundness should affect the shading on the eyeball, as well as the shape of the eyelids.

[edit] ... but then again, for a quick drawing without reference, it ain't half bad. [/edit]

[ June 14, 2001: Message edited by: waylon ]
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Perplexer
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 4:16 am     Reply with quote
other than what has already been said i suggest you make the highlights of the eyeball a little sharper so the eyeball appears smoother and wet. good job though!
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empyrios
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 4:53 am     Reply with quote
Hi.

I did a very quick touchup because I like green eyes (girlfriend has them).



Should be pretty easy to spot the changes, but feel free to yell at me for butchering your image.

- Rich [empyrean / iCE]
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sweedberg
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2001 2:03 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for wasting those seconds for my sake! The one thing tat�s sure is that crtichism doesn�t make anyone worse...it�s just gving hints to improvement!

...hope I�ll get bored soon again so I�ll make something else you guys can help me enhance... =)
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