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ime · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 1:37 am

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sorry
i've posted them before but didn't get eny comments
please crits and comments only this time...
thanx guys

[ June 12, 2001: Message edited by: ime ]

Vividetail · junior member Member # Joined: 12 Jun 2001 Posts: 21

its a very nice style and way of rendering...

... even though i find the motifs rather disturbing

Scourvensen · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 2:38 am

I like 4-th the most. The colors of others too. The last one looks not finished ( even if it's only a color sketch )maybe you should do sth with this bright place under right arm... It's all done with mouse? Wow.

[ June 12, 2001: Message edited by: Scourvensen ]

ime · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:12 pm

Vividetail - thanx for offering your first post to me... and for compliments

Scourvensen - thanx, can you explain why 4th? there was no bright place under arm but it looked rather boring without it.... so i highlighted part which gave the most important feeling of the mood and pose and rendered that part more carefully and with more details of light, color and texture aswell as tiny lightspots on his feet
yes it's only mouse and 20 minutes each (or less)

thanx again... please more crits on each one

Scourvensen · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:19 am

Why 4-th?
It has the best pose. That's all. You know: you watch that pic and you know everything about this bunny and about his BAD moods

... I'like the others too ( great colours, as I said before ) but this one is the best. Simple and clear.
The 5-th looks little messy. And posing is strange. Sth bad happens with his legs... I know what you wanted to do, but maybe it is a little too exaggerated...

And buy Wacom.
Now!

Scourvensen · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:23 am

BTW, it looks like nobody likes your bunnies

ime · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:30 am

thanx Scourvensen
yup they don't like him
but why won't they post what's wrong with him... like crits
cannot afford wacom... cannot afford even computer

it's hard to find any digitalart related job here in estonia....
btw you're never online in ICQ?

neebhore · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:41 am

I thought they were good! I like your loose style to them, and the gloomy atmosphere.

[edit] I thought you missed one out, but I was wrong.

[ June 13, 2001: Message edited by: neebhore ]

Scourvensen · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 4:14 am

ICQ?

Yeah, I'm reinstalling system guite often, and always forget to instal ICQ. I was born in "before computers Age" so I don't need ICQ to live...

But.., hmmm, o.k. I install ICQ, again

Cos · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 7:07 am

I think your bunnys rule ime.. You are getting a really cool watercolour look, my favourite is that last one. I wanna see more =)

Gimbal8 · Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 7:50 am

Your bunnies are better then mine. And I spent more then 20 minutes on mine...with a tablet.

About the pics:
1- I like the emotion envokes with this one. The red to green transition, the somber look of the bunnies face, and the verticle 'rain' like effect on the overall image all convey a mood.
2- This one lacks the things that #1 had. Although a good monochramtic type peice, there isn't anything there that speaks to me in the form of mood, atmosphere, or action.
3- This one has great atmosphere, as I mentioned before in the other thread. The color used, the lighting, the perspective on the bunny's stance, all give the picture that feel of being on stage. The ropes of the ring might be a little off and maybe they could have been placed so that it seems like the viewer about mat level, giving the bunny a larger then life type pose.
4-This one I have to agree is probably the coolest. The pose just says it all. From the placing of the arms to the direction of the ears, you can just tell that he's one cocky fighting bunny. And although there isn't any color transitions or atmosphere to speak of, the fact that you portrayed 'character' with this pic goes a long way towards making it an impressionable peice.
5- I really like the colors used with this one but the strong white light is distracting. Although it does attract the eye to that part of the picture, it seems to create a shape that looks out of place overall. Perhaps toning down the light or showing where the light is coming from (as we can see the source of it) might help. The bag of bunny ears is hard to make out at first. If these were fixed it would make this pic a really good one for showing both character and atmosphere...maybe even a disturbing mood.