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Morbid Guy
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 7:21 am     Reply with quote
This ones pretty much done, although I think it still may need some tweaking up. Might add some tattoos or piercings to the woman. Comments, critisisms are welcome.



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Vgta
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 7:24 am     Reply with quote
Hey pretty good looking piece.
I think it just needs more highlights, everything kinda melds together.
www.bromart.com www.justinsweet.com

just to give you some inspiration.
I like it though, really cool looking piece.
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Frost
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 7:26 am     Reply with quote
Damn that guy is BIG! He doesn't look very human though... is that intentional? =) Cool work Kyri!
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 7:31 am     Reply with quote
very dirty but very nice!
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Morbid Guy
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:12 am     Reply with quote
Vgta, thanks for the links Already know about them guys and they rule man. I think my pic was kinda inspired a little by Justin Sweets style. Been looking at his stuff a lot lately.

Cheers Frostie mate, Yeah, the guy is intentionally wierd looking. I think he must have been hitting the mutant anabolics or something , heh, heh.

Vividetail, glad you liked it.
Dirty,how?...as in top shelf publication
dirty, or grimy, filthy, unwashed dirty?
Yeah, you are right looking at it, I think I need to clean up some areas, thanks for pointing it out.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:41 am     Reply with quote
wow.. I really like this peice of work.. this has alot of potential..

I agree with above tho.. it needs alot more contrast and highlights.. darker darks and lighter lights..


****** there was a pic here until *******
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hope this conveys the point properly..

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Frost
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 9:20 am     Reply with quote
(I personally like it better without the flashy highlights)
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 10:24 am     Reply with quote
*frost pulls trigger* BLAM!!!!! *Awetopsy goes down*

ah well. guess its best to be shot down by the best
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:42 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the paintover Awetopsy. I can see what your trying to get at,but I was trying to get away a little from the high contrast look, going for more of a gritty. Like Frost mentioned 'flashy highlights' I didn't want the flashy stuff with this...but I appreciate you trying to help. Thanks.

Kos, hey cheers mate Yeah I think I agree about the flatness, looking at it again. I think the problem may be to do with the background. I may try to darken it some like you suggested. Nice one.

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Cos
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 2:01 pm     Reply with quote
Lukias damn I wish this looked like my style, actually Kyri is my bro! so thats probably why u noticed similarities, I been influenced by his artwork alot soo its kinda the other way around hehe.

Kyri you know I think this pic is frikkin class (as usual), more more more!! =))

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 4:54 pm     Reply with quote
I really like the strokes in this. I almost think I would really like it better if the girl wasn't in it at all. I don't know.. I jsut don't think she fits into it well... but i really like the guy-thingy and the bg.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 6:55 pm     Reply with quote
(Awetopsy: Sorry, and thanks, although I am unworthy of it).

Kyri: Gonna work some more on it? (the girl seems a little 2d-ish compared to "Mr.Poundyourskullin" -- sorry =))
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 9:04 pm     Reply with quote
Extension 13, thanks mate, I'm glad you like. The woman is gonna stay tho, sorry.

Frost, oh you are worthy of it Yeah I'm glad you noticed the 2d-ishness on
the woman and pointed that out, I will probably work on it some more, thanks.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:50 pm     Reply with quote
Great work Kyri, I love the expression in the girl's face

That's a bad Awetopsy (hits Awetopsy's head with a stick)
But I can see his point, the piece looks a bit flat... Maybe darken the background to bring the characters forward

Great piece
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 4:38 am     Reply with quote
Hey bro sorry I missed you out, I meant to reply to you but forgot, my brain is turning to crap. Thanks for the kind words, the fiver's on it's way Cos please don't underestimate your skills. I have noticed you have made huge leaps with your artwork in last few months. Just keep going,creating better and better work as you are
and I look forward to seeing whatever work is coming in the future.
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