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Junior
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Hi,
I'm a new guy here, my name is Omri, I'm 16.5 (Hence Junior\Toddler) and I speak English, Swedish and Hebrew,
I find the art here really impressive and each visit makes me refrain from activity for about a week each time 
Anyway, this is one of my works:
 
What I'd like, as well as feedback, would be if any of you would like to try and color it.
Good luck!
Cya  |
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Steven Stahlberg
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| Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 4:40 pm |
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Ok, I didn't color it in but I made some changes to the anatomy and perspective, and added some suggestions as to shading.
[ June 10, 2001: Message edited by: Steven Stahlberg ] |
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Collosimo
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| Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 4:58 pm |
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Junior, Welcome to the Sijun.com forum's. Hope you have a great time here. I do.
I don't completely understand the situation as far as this image portrays.. I can't work out exaclty if the character is standing up or lying down... perhaps Steven Stahlberg, had the idea, ... and now he is changing it... Guess I'll see after I post this.. (he edited his above post whilst I was writing this.) |
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akiva
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| Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 5:01 pm |
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Hey!
I'm Israeli too! Okay, so i'm technichally not living there right now, but I was born there and lived there last year for a year. Where in Israel are you from?
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Silybum
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| Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 5:12 pm |
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| It looks to me like the viewpoint is from low ground looking up at the character, but the pentagram perspective doesn't reflect that as much. I think if you squash the pentagram horizontally it would help (also adjusting the position of the candles). Also there is something going on with his right foot. The left looks ok. Just an amateur observations, please disregard if wrong Steven will hopefully chime in with a helpfull image/hint. |
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Junior
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| Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 11:41 pm |
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Yup, he's standing up.
The pentagram is indeed not in the right perspective, I know.
Akiva, I'm from a kibbutz in the north called Nir-David.
By the way, I also made him a partner, and pasted on the same face:  |
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Junior
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| Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 6:00 am |
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I actually gave a first shot at coloring it myself,my first time really coloring any serious work with the pc here goes
nothing  :
Please crit and give it a shot yourselfs.
CYA |
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S4Sb
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| Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 6:35 am |
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| That's an improvement steven... wow. |
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Junior
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| Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:20 pm |
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Anybody?  |
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