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Ilmari junior member
Member # Joined: 17 May 2001 Posts: 40 Location: Finland
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 2:29 am |
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um. right. |
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Collosimo member
Member # Joined: 30 Dec 2000 Posts: 551 Location: Brisbane, QLD, Australia
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 4:06 am |
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Dont know what to say really...
do you want critique?
I like it..
I like the general rendering of it.. and that counts at least. It seems to me that you have got a good grip on rendering in B&W. You have good expressive skills. Your economy of line is quite good. |
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topeira member
Member # Joined: 07 Feb 2001 Posts: 553 Location: Holon, Israel
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 4:35 am |
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very pretty i must say.
though... um... is that a wall behind him? are those tubes coming out of the wall? not clear enough |
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Ilmari junior member
Member # Joined: 17 May 2001 Posts: 40 Location: Finland
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 4:51 am |
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holes in the wall. the wall behind his back is just a border around the picture, it's a bit confusing. there's no real perspective, just comic frame weird blah style thing um. right. |
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Ragnarok member
Member # Joined: 12 Nov 2000 Posts: 1085 Location: Navarra, Spain
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 6:53 am |
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Full Throttle style =)
I like it |
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Basement bound member
Member # Joined: 11 Mar 2001 Posts: 874 Location: Calgary.ab.ca
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 12:42 pm |
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Ilmari i like it nice pose and environment. My only comment is that the holes are darker than the rest of the picture... causes a bit of a distraction. I also think the image could use more contrast and perhaps droping of some shadows. I see this guy in the sewer perhaps under a grate that is letting light down ... some hardcore environment. |
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burn0ut member
Member # Joined: 18 Apr 2000 Posts: 1645 Location: california
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 6:58 pm |
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Hey thats pretty nice!  |
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swampbug member
Member # Joined: 18 May 2000 Posts: 401 Location: il
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 7:32 pm |
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It's perfect for the bottom right hand corner of (your webpage) if you have one.. The theme and border would have to circle everything though. Nice jobbe! |
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William H. Daniels member
Member # Joined: 18 May 2001 Posts: 89 Location: Loxley, AL, USA
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 7:27 am |
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I agree with B.b. There should be more contrast. There should be some highlights and shadows. If nothing else, the area under his butt should be almost complete darkness. |
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Icannon member
Member # Joined: 13 Sep 2000 Posts: 597 Location: st.albert, AB, Canada
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 2:41 pm |
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i'd like to see more from this scene - but it's very cool none the less. |
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Vividetail junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jun 2001 Posts: 21
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 7:17 am |
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i really like the mood in this picture. it expresses exactly how i feel after a long day of rough sex . |
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