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Ilmari
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 2:29 am     Reply with quote


um. right.
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Collosimo
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 4:06 am     Reply with quote
Dont know what to say really...

do you want critique?

I like it..

I like the general rendering of it.. and that counts at least. It seems to me that you have got a good grip on rendering in B&W. You have good expressive skills. Your economy of line is quite good.
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topeira
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 4:35 am     Reply with quote
very pretty i must say.

though... um... is that a wall behind him? are those tubes coming out of the wall? not clear enough
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Ilmari
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 4:51 am     Reply with quote
holes in the wall. the wall behind his back is just a border around the picture, it's a bit confusing. there's no real perspective, just comic frame weird blah style thing um. right.
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Ragnarok
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 6:53 am     Reply with quote
Full Throttle style =)
I like it
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Basement bound
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 12:42 pm     Reply with quote
Ilmari i like it nice pose and environment. My only comment is that the holes are darker than the rest of the picture... causes a bit of a distraction. I also think the image could use more contrast and perhaps droping of some shadows. I see this guy in the sewer perhaps under a grate that is letting light down ... some hardcore environment.
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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 6:58 pm     Reply with quote
Hey thats pretty nice!
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swampbug
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 7:32 pm     Reply with quote
It's perfect for the bottom right hand corner of (your webpage) if you have one.. The theme and border would have to circle everything though. Nice jobbe!
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William H. Daniels
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 7:27 am     Reply with quote
I agree with B.b. There should be more contrast. There should be some highlights and shadows. If nothing else, the area under his butt should be almost complete darkness.
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Icannon
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 2:41 pm     Reply with quote
i'd like to see more from this scene - but it's very cool none the less.
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Vividetail
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 7:17 am     Reply with quote
i really like the mood in this picture. it expresses exactly how i feel after a long day of rough sex .
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