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stereophoenix
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 Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2001 5:43 pm |
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comments/suggestions/anything is appreciated. |
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Prometheus-ANJ
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| Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2001 5:52 pm |
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Look very good to me. It has "air" in it, something most of my pictures lack.
A few things tho.
The sword is to bulky. There is an annoying vertical bright line across the center of the pic. The ground under her feet needs more definition, right now she kinda hovers. |
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daz199
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| Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2001 6:11 pm |
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nice atmosphere
berry berry cool  |
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Pringle
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| Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2001 7:10 pm |
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Nice picture.
Crouching tiger.
I like the vertical line. |
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Visigothan
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| Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2001 10:08 pm |
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Excellent color and composition on this piece... I don't have any crits or other comments, sorry...Just enjoying looking at it.  |
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Morbid Guy
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| Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2001 11:52 pm |
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| I love this pic, it looks great. Very cinematic, it kinda reminds me a bit of Spooges work. I don't think theres anything wrong with the verticle lines, adds an experimental type of look to it. |
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schabe
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| Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 3:13 am |
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very cool pic. great atmosphere.
i see the same problems like ANJ-77.
and perhaps the proportions look little wrong. the head is imho a little too small. maybe im wrong and its because the clothing to lay on the bottom ? |
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Cos
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| Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 3:42 am |
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Great piece, looks quite spooge style but with more cartoony colours. I love the loose strokes and the experimentalness. I like the vertical line, gives it that old film quality.
Critwise her arms seem too long to me, and the sword abit chunky. |
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+5
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| Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 6:19 am |
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Nah, her head is quite okay. 
love the atmosphere in it, too. great lighting from behind, and nice, sketchy work with the landscape, too.
I think the sword needs more work though. is it supposed to be a chinese tai-chi sword? if so, then it needs to look more fragile and less bulky, as ANJ-77 already said. |
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Collosimo
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| Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 4:13 pm |
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Good to see this made its way from deviantart over to here..
Hope you got some better feedback than "OMG I wet my pants"
I can see why this made DD it is pretty darn good. Not alot to crit on... It is well produced.
Only thing I'll say is that the anatomy is a little distracting. Her body, arms, torso legs.. all look too long for her shoulders and head.
Nice pic. I love the loose and expressive light stlye. |
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Seraphire
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| Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 4:30 pm |
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Man, I like that.
(Generic, worthless post.)
Good choice of color for the sky. |
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