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TheSourPatchKid
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 Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 8:18 am |
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What do you guys think of this rendition of Noah's ark? This is after the rain has all fallen.
I am not sure if I like it yet. I just don't know if it communicates well enough.
What do you think??
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 8:40 am |
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hey, I really like the sky and the water.. the only two things that I thought were these:
1) there isnt enough difference between the sky and water, where they meet.
2) the ark doesnt look very Ark-like. It looked to me at first like a big log. you might take a little artistic lisence with the ark and make it a little more traditional. try giving it those peaks on the top corners and a deck on the front with the silhouette of a guy in the front.
anyway.. its looking pretty cool.
[edit] also, I just thought of this, try adding about an inch more sky to the top and about 1/2 inch more watter to the bottom. that would make the composition very cool 
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TheSourPatchKid
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| Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 8:49 am |
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I like that advice thanks.
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Dr.Squirley
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| Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 12:14 pm |
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| ok ishmael... |
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William H. Daniels
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| Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 11:22 pm |
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At first, I thougt it was the end of "Moby Dick" with a floating coffin. Needs some more details in the boat.
I agree that there should be more definition at the horizon.
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