[Loxis]

theres a little something i did today, please post any crit or comment... i really meen it.

[Loxis]

oups, its not indead, but indeed. Pardon my english.

[sacrelicious]

I like it. He looks like a young kid who will one day become a formidable warrior. Or something.

[u2art]

hey Loxis, looks cool, you wanna crit?? okee doke. First I think you need to be more confident with your markmaking, or ink them after you draw them. Confidence just comes with time, and practice, you'll get it. not a bad drawing...just looks sketchy and nervous. Second, he is a little stiff, you have alot of straight lines...and his clothes hang straight down...add some curve-age to get more motion, or put him in a situation so he isnt just standing there...unless it is just a model sheet. If you want someone to appear strong and unmovable then straight lines work, of course on your little guy he looks formidable in a kid way, so it could work. I think you can get more movement in the drawing and still make him look formidable though I know it! Well that is my opinion
HAHA, looks cool Keep up the drawing dude.

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[Loxis]

wow thanks, well, its very rare that i have the time to ink and color my drawings but i will try to do it more oftem.

You re totally right about the line thing, i have a problem with that and also to try putting my characters in a scene representing the action they doing.

thx again

[topeira]

i will comment about other stuff, like the fingers that look like lil knifes or something. too pointy. and the legs are too long and even tho it was done on purpose it gives the kid a look of a scarecrow. a weird posture.

but the face is great!