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masticator
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masticator
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| Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2001 1:04 am |
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any kind of criticism or suggestion is appreciated  |
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Morbid Guy
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| Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2001 1:20 am |
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| Masticator, that looks really nice. Reminds me a little of Robocop. I like the way you did the lighting on the guys face, looks very nice. I would try add some harder edges to the head plate, it looks too similar to the flesh at the moment. Overall nice work. |
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u2art
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| Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2001 1:23 am |
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heyyy Nice I like the detail and the fact that the face looks like it is on there. Nice edges. My only real crit is I like chiaroscuro...so I put morelights and dark in my pieces. You have 2 equal light sources in front and back...so one needs to be dominant. and the other subordinate, otherwise your image gets grayed out and flat...(if that is what you want)....if you dont mind I tried it on yours, see what you think...lemme know if you want me to take it down and I will. I also added a little bit of light on th bottom left to give atmosphere and make it look less like a study of a head.
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topeira
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| Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2001 4:10 am |
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i wanted to say something about the lack of hard lights and dark parts but then i say u2art's comment and i guess that this is what i wanted to say so, there u go
but it looks very very good. i'd do the mechanism a lil different under the face but that's just me.
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