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Anthony J · Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 6:27 pm

New image, well its old actually, but revised so its new now ! dig it ?

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Collosimo · Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 7:51 pm

I can't see the whole image. It just stopped...

shahar2k · Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2001 1:51 am

nice picture, next time try not to post your picture in other people's threads, it's very annoying, it's like going to an art gallery, and going around yelling "but look at MY painting!"
get you in nothing but truble here

now, for the crit

this seems like a very good drawing, although there are a few errors in proportion
the eyes are too far apart for one, but other than that it is nice, you could probably add a lot more modeling to it by adding diffrent tones.... I'll leave it to the rest of the people here to crit more, since I don't know much else to say....

Entreri · Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2001 2:30 pm

Nice job. I think the biggest problem is the ears are too small and the nose and eyes don't line up. Also the head shape is a little odd. Not to sure about the lighting, but at least it looks nice.

dead · member Member # Joined: 18 Feb 2001 Posts: 489

Nice painting Anthony, I like all the marks. You'll get no complaints from me. But i wonder- do you think Mos Def is related to Abe Lincon?

Tron · member Member # Joined: 15 Dec 2000 Posts: 118

really awesome!
i like this painting very much, there�s atmosphere in it. the face looks very alive-cool.
i just think the left eye is a bit to high.
bye

Anthony J · Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2001 4:41 pm

thanks for saying something shahar2k , even though if Vgta said I was being rude it would have made alot more sense. It's good that your
sticking up for the junior members though!

I know it's hard to speak up for ones self sometimes, been around here for a while ...

I fully Apologize for blatenly slamming my work into your thread Vgta

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Anthony J · Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2001 4:48 pm

thanks for the crit Entreri
hard to stomach, but I can see the problems your pointing out.

as for at least looking nice, I hope it at least does that ! Otherwise I guess it's just another doodle...better luck next time I guess

OH MAN, now I'm double posting...better watch that ...I might get slammed again

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Molybdenum-Indiscipline · Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2001 4:52 pm

I have that album. . . very nice work. Umi says perhaps a little more light.