Sijun Forums :: View topic - I'm back with another "guysrepairingsomething" Pic

Capt.FlushGarden · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 5:58 am

Hello there!
I got so tired painting this pic so I desided it was ready for posting...
Feel free to tell me whatI could add or take away blablabla...simply Crits
Uhm...I'm gonna get rid of the black line between the light thingies from the truck in the foreground...I forgot about it and a friend told me just after I uploaded it...*sigh*

I rendered a simple model in 3dSmax and painted on it...

[ May 25, 2001: Message edited by: Capt.FlushGarden ]

zaar · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 6:01 am

can't see a thing!

Capt.FlushGarden · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 6:08 am

Ah forget about it...thought it might work...but nooo

Jezebel · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 6:11 am

That's really cool Cap. Painting over a 3d model is something I've been wanting to try. Just my personal opinion, but I think the texture on the pavement (in the foreground, especially in the headlights) stands out a little too much.

Everything else looks badass... you did a really good job.

Beth

Jezebel · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 6:12 am

You should put your pics in an html document and place a link to the page

Joachim · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 6:55 am

very nice capitan. Nice to see you're posting again too ! You've done a lot with the original rendering, or actually everything except the perspective. I guess it was for the challenge, if not I think you probably could have rendered more values and colors & textures as well, and the get more for free

-But, impressive it is.

Gimbal8 · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 7:03 am

Wow, that is really badass (as Jezebel puts it). I'd also have to agree with her on the concrete texture in the forground. The texture seems to large in scale then it should be.

Kaiju · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 7:15 am

That looks cool. The line of light on the left looks crooked though or not lined up properly. At the top it seems to start to the right of the lamp and beneath the tail fin it curves to the left.

Capt.FlushGarden · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 8:30 am

Thanx for crits everyone!

I made the 3d model that simple because I wantedto paint some too! All I wanted was correct perspective on the enginges and stuff, I wanted to play a little and challange myself so that's why I did't makethe 3d scene that detailed...

Capt.FlushGarden · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 8:34 am

I have serious problems with my spacebar key...so some words might sticktogether know what I mean? ehhe

Snake Grunger · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 8:34 am

Very awesome! You kept working on it and making it all nice and tidy. But I think there aren't enough tiny super highlights on the metal, and not enough dark spaces where no light could go. I really dig the little guys standing around

Really adds life to your painting!

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Merekat · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 8:41 am

(thanks Snake, I wouldn't have seen it otherwise)

Capt'n:

*sigh* HOW do you do it? I don't think I'm that shabby, but you're YEARS younger than I, and you're pulling out this kinda stuff from your brain??!!!

I just don't get it.

I LOVE this pic. I am SO jealous... ;P ;}

you wouldn't happen to need a grasshopper, would you?

Capt.FlushGarden · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 8:44 am

Thanks Snake Grunger for letting meuse you server thingy you got back there in quebec!

Yes that could be cool, super ultra highligts on the metal...I'll put this painting on the shelf...wait a month and finish it later...when I'm BETTER!

AH hello grasshoppah merekat! how is my little princess today? stop it I won't go to bed with you just because you say you're jealous...muhaha

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Binke · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 8:48 am

Hey Captn! This is awesome ( as usual ) but I think the aircraft could use some more detail, or maybe more small highlights as they said, but im just being nitpicky.
Hey why are you never online on ICQ

-Tepox- · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 10:51 am

I can't belive my eyes! Damn great work!!!
You have to give short briefing how you did this... What I can guess you used filter for the ground and aeroplane's shadow is in separate layer? But anyway this so impressive! congratz Cap.

v1510nAry · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 2:07 pm

yay your back with another great peice of work

Visigothan · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 2:11 pm

...jesus Captain... :| That's really good... I've got no critique...I can't do better... LOL

Dryfire · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 3:06 pm

that is sooo cool, wow the detail is awesome!

black_fish · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 3:14 pm

Fucking Hell! (like they say in the UK)

That's amazing in its photorealisticness! Looks like a matte painting (but not like the crappy ones in The Mummy Returns).

Great! I'm amazed!

Capt.FlushGarden · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 3:57 pm

Thank you everyone!
I really feel like continuing on this pic now hehehe
Peace!!

KiNgStiNg · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 5:11 pm

WOW

nuff said

Frost · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 5:18 pm

Nice! ICQ me when you're online next.

-Tepox- · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 5:39 pm

Come on! give us some information about this pic! I just came from the bar...... and i didn't have so good
evening... so
... it could be nice if say somethingf about making process....?!?

geoman2k · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 5:48 pm

thats awesome... i really like the lights and the textures-- the way the light hits the ground is awesome.

Fragancia · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 7:42 pm

Hey, I really like your work. It looks like if everything were rended in 3DS. Keep it up.

Leo · Posted: Sat May 26, 2001 12:02 am

Hi man,
everything been said before, i can only add a suggestion - if you paint over the render and the scene is complex i found useful to left some wireframe. If you drop a grid at big shapes (like floor or walls) it will be much easy to keep the perspective right.

and nothing wrong with that black line - looks like sort of floor texture... just draw it away.

keep painting dude!
-leo

Ilmari · Posted: Sat May 26, 2001 1:17 am

A smashing job as usual. I really dig the reflection of the back wall light on the concrete.

noco · junior member Member # Joined: 18 May 2001 Posts: 37

Hello Captain, wonderful work!
From your picture, I would feel the pic's air... cool and containing some mechanical oil.

I like this sight and the air !

Capt.FlushGarden · Posted: Sat May 26, 2001 4:30 am

Thanx everyone

Leo: thank you for tips, I'll keep that in mind when I do my next pic...

-Tepox-: bad evening ey?

I don't really know what to tell ya, all I did was play around with the different layer options (multiply, color dodge, and all that stuff) I just painted, bada bing bada boom hehe

Collosimo · Posted: Sat May 26, 2001 10:22 pm

Nice.. inspiring.. I want to try some sort of pic like this... realistic and about some sort of military plane or vehichle.. always fun.

Cool light refelections