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Salty Dog · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 5:18 am

Hey there! Some have already seen my pencils of this piece over in "works in progress" I got ahold of makotierra, who imho, can bust out some badass colors, and he so graciously colored it for me!

Thanks Mako! Hope to do some more collaboration with you in the future!

chip_artz · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 6:39 am

I like it, kinda reminds me of one of my characters. MakoTierra colored it? Yeah that guy's good.

Staff Sarge · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 7:42 am

Wow, now that's a nice armour. Yeah, I remember this one at WIP. The colouring reminds me about Marvel comics but it looks very good nevertheless.

Nice job. I'd like to see more of these.

FFNeX · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 9:01 am

That's really nice, both the colors and the drawing.

TheSourPatchKid · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 12:48 pm

SSllluuurrrrppp slurp tasty

Merekat · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 12:54 pm

hey, beautiful linework! my only crit is that the head looks a little large for the torso, or rather perhaps the torso is too small for the body. And the head looks a little placed offcenter, too. (sorry)

But! that's fabulous. I admire such clean lines. :}

Salty Dog · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 3:04 pm

hehehe..I agree the head is a bit off-kilter and maybe a tad large..but not a whole lot I can do now

Why didn't you say something about it over in Works In Progress when I could've fixed it? hehehehe

Merekat · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 5:04 pm

;} sorry buddy, but 1) I usually don't peruse the WiP. No particular reason other than time. and 2) I didn't get back into the forum until today (been away for months). Been crazy busy. I apologize. It must be frustrating.

Still great work, tho. ;}

topeira · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 11:16 pm

i think the coloring is a bit too pale but great lineart.

and i'm not sure the head's too big. i think the proportion of the torso are a lil wrong but if the head is 1\3 of the torso than it's pretty ok. i think the distance between the collar bones to the beginnig of the abs should've been bigger. other than that the proporsions are fine.

cheerz. kewl piece.