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DiXter member
Member # Joined: 17 Mar 2001 Posts: 622 Location: sweden
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 1:32 pm |
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Just a character sketch I did for practice that turned out to be quite fun to color..
I know that the anatomy is a bit off but, tell me what you think.. ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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prophet member
Member # Joined: 01 Feb 2001 Posts: 58 Location: Derby, KS USA
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:12 pm |
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Great work. Love those lines...very solid. The blocky gun accents the shoes nicely :0)
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Impaler member
Member # Joined: 02 Dec 1999 Posts: 1560 Location: Albuquerque.NewMexico.USA
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:14 pm |
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1) What sort of moustache is that?
2) The gun is pretty cool, minus the fact that it looks like the cigarette lighter of doom. The muzzle needs some sort of choke shot modifier. It won't be very accurate otherwise.
3) He's likely to break his ankle wearing high heels, especially when he's shooting his enemies with the huge cigarette lighter. Make it something plausible, like Nazi-Stomping rubber treads or something. He wouldn't be able to run with those cleats.
The anatomy actually looks fine by me. |
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roundeye member
Member # Joined: 21 Mar 2001 Posts: 1059 Location: toronto
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:35 pm |
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wow, thats awesome! such a nice stylized look. and great colours. nice and clean. |
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KiNgStiNg member
Member # Joined: 17 Nov 2000 Posts: 129 Location: Canada
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:46 pm |
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ooooooh that is pretty sexy ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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Staff Sarge member
Member # Joined: 04 Feb 2001 Posts: 177 Location: finland
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:54 pm |
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Hmm.. that's an upset man wearing boxing gloves and downhill boots while carrying a huge vacuum cleaner? j/k
Nice style. I like that transparent detail on the gun. |
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SpiralEye member
Member # Joined: 08 May 2001 Posts: 234 Location: Savannah, GA
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 5:17 pm |
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Interesting shoes. Pretty cool, man. I like the holes in his shirt and the coloring around them suggesting they were shot, not just ripped or worn. |
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N8X member
Member # Joined: 13 Oct 2000 Posts: 112 Location: Austin,Tx usa
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 5:30 pm |
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wow love your textures and details. very nice.. Oh an dont liesten to impaler. he knows not.
keep it up |
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FFNeX member
Member # Joined: 15 Dec 2000 Posts: 133 Location: Miami, FL, USA
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 8:25 pm |
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lol, I agree, no offense impaler, nothing against you but:
1) The mustache looks fine
2) It kinda looks Doomish, but not like a cigaretter lighter.
3) I agree with this one.
4) I think the musculature doesn't look too good, I mean, the arms are nice and maybe the body, but the pecs are way too small. You can't really tell though, and he did warned us about it.
Overall I think the picture kicks ass, keep it up. |
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chip_artz member
Member # Joined: 07 Mar 2001 Posts: 92 Location: LI, NY
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 8:30 pm |
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Nice colors= cool gun. Do you do backgrounds? |
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burn0ut member
Member # Joined: 18 Apr 2000 Posts: 1645 Location: california
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 9:01 pm |
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thats dope man, i like the thin outline around him |
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NukleoN member
Member # Joined: 11 May 2001 Posts: 236 Location: CA
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 11:18 pm |
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Hey there,
I like this a lot..great lines. Love the subtle lines on the inside..good technique there. The chest looks a tad small, but if he were flexing one could argue that it is compressed and working harder...the hose is well rendered but seems like it should be reinforced somehow..I like the square gun nozzle. The boots seem too square and heavy, almost Lego-like...tho I like how they are rendered.
Nice job.
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DiXter member
Member # Joined: 17 Mar 2001 Posts: 622 Location: sweden
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 11:37 pm |
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About those shoes..
They were intended to look like some sort of anti electricity boots and were meant to look very big and cloumsy.
Why would he need to run when he got that bigass cigarette lighter to protect himself with..
But I might have made them a bit too big.. ![](images/smiles/icon_rolleyes.gif) |
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DiXter member
Member # Joined: 17 Mar 2001 Posts: 622 Location: sweden
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 11:45 pm |
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And thanks for the feedback guys.. I appreciate it!! ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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