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DiXter
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 1:32 pm     Reply with quote
Just a character sketch I did for practice that turned out to be quite fun to color..

I know that the anatomy is a bit off but, tell me what you think..
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:12 pm     Reply with quote
Great work. Love those lines...very solid. The blocky gun accents the shoes nicely :0)

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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:14 pm     Reply with quote
1) What sort of moustache is that?

2) The gun is pretty cool, minus the fact that it looks like the cigarette lighter of doom. The muzzle needs some sort of choke shot modifier. It won't be very accurate otherwise.

3) He's likely to break his ankle wearing high heels, especially when he's shooting his enemies with the huge cigarette lighter. Make it something plausible, like Nazi-Stomping rubber treads or something. He wouldn't be able to run with those cleats.

The anatomy actually looks fine by me.
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roundeye
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:35 pm     Reply with quote
wow, thats awesome! such a nice stylized look. and great colours. nice and clean.
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KiNgStiNg
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:46 pm     Reply with quote
ooooooh that is pretty sexy
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Staff Sarge
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:54 pm     Reply with quote
Hmm.. that's an upset man wearing boxing gloves and downhill boots while carrying a huge vacuum cleaner? j/k

Nice style. I like that transparent detail on the gun.
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SpiralEye
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 5:17 pm     Reply with quote
Interesting shoes. Pretty cool, man. I like the holes in his shirt and the coloring around them suggesting they were shot, not just ripped or worn.
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 5:30 pm     Reply with quote
wow love your textures and details. very nice.. Oh an dont liesten to impaler. he knows not.

keep it up
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FFNeX
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 8:25 pm     Reply with quote
lol, I agree, no offense impaler, nothing against you but:

1) The mustache looks fine

2) It kinda looks Doomish, but not like a cigaretter lighter.

3) I agree with this one.

4) I think the musculature doesn't look too good, I mean, the arms are nice and maybe the body, but the pecs are way too small. You can't really tell though, and he did warned us about it.

Overall I think the picture kicks ass, keep it up.
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chip_artz
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 8:30 pm     Reply with quote
Nice colors= cool gun. Do you do backgrounds?
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 9:01 pm     Reply with quote
thats dope man, i like the thin outline around him
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NukleoN
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 11:18 pm     Reply with quote
Hey there,

I like this a lot..great lines. Love the subtle lines on the inside..good technique there. The chest looks a tad small, but if he were flexing one could argue that it is compressed and working harder...the hose is well rendered but seems like it should be reinforced somehow..I like the square gun nozzle. The boots seem too square and heavy, almost Lego-like...tho I like how they are rendered.

Nice job.

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DiXter
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 11:37 pm     Reply with quote
About those shoes..
They were intended to look like some sort of anti electricity boots and were meant to look very big and cloumsy.
Why would he need to run when he got that bigass cigarette lighter to protect himself with..

But I might have made them a bit too big..
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DiXter
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 11:45 pm     Reply with quote
And thanks for the feedback guys.. I appreciate it!!
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