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nightmare
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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2001 10:38 am     Reply with quote


what do you think?
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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2001 10:43 am     Reply with quote
Well the drawing is cool. The girl seems to be sitting a little awkwardly. As well I think the perspective looks a little off from her feet in comparison to her neck and shoulders. And she seems a little stiff and you may want to size up her hands. Anyways just some comments. Nice Drawing.
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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2001 11:14 pm     Reply with quote
yay! thanks for the reply! i really have to fix those hands... they give me the most trouble *sigh*
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 2:51 pm     Reply with quote
um. sorry to bump but can i please get a few more crits on this?
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 3:53 pm     Reply with quote
Her boobs look uneven... maybe?
I don't know, I don't have critique, since it's cartoon style, it shoulden't be too realistic, nice.
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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2001 4:01 pm     Reply with quote
Drawing that close the edge of the page fucks with your head man.

Her neck is too thick.
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