[EviLToYLeT]

Well, I actually set down and started.. well drawing on the comp. Ain't the best... but this is as finished as it's gonna get. The more I try to fix stuff up, the worse it seems to get.

Anyway, green because I remember seeing spooges tutorial..and hey, it was green black gradient I think. Any crits, comments, or repaints would be helpful in the learning process. Thanks.

[Hlid Skjalff]

Well it's got green gradient and a guy...

As I recall you don't need someone's tutorial's... Your previous works were awesome, so why not just move to something else and drop the green sucker? :-))))))
But if you really want to hear something about this one... its out of proportions, its too sketchy and its... GREEN.. :-)))))

[jasonN]

Hey eviltoylet, the main thing that stands out for me is the green. I dunno if it was intentional or not, but the green is *really* green. Like radioactive green. If you tone down the saturation of your green it might give it a more natural look and help your work flow easier.

[Dives]

can he reach his thighs with those arms?
sowrd does not look like it would work.