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Jucas
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 Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 9:18 am |
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Here's a splash/nav image I was working on for my website. I dunno if I like it.... Anyhoo what I was thinking was having the links for navigation around the site, below the grey line. Any comments and crits are welcome.
Oh BTW Krummenos Maska means "The Hidden Mask". And the Kanji, in the background, is japanese and means the Hidden Mask as well.
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Jucas
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| Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 9:23 am |
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Here's the original line art.
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Jucas
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| Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 5:32 pm |
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Jucas
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| Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 11:11 pm |
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| jeez not one comment..... |
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Twice
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| Posted: Sat May 19, 2001 4:48 am |
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first of all, stop bumping. Won't give you any C&C faster. Just anoying.
The pic is kinda cool, but not my kind of art. So I'll leav the comment to someone els! |
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geoman2k
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| Posted: Sat May 19, 2001 7:20 am |
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hmm.... i don't like it very much. for 1 thing, it reminds me of the black & white (the game) logo too much. also, i think the asian text makes it a little too busy. also, i think you should clean up the lines on the graphic, and make the canvas size bigger- its cropped too close, so there is too much posivite spave and not enough negative. makes it look a little bit too cluttered.
keep working on it, buddy
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