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Alan
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 Posted: Sun May 13, 2001 4:58 am |
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Hi all...
I did this as a figure study, quick and dirty. Just curious if it looks like I got the basics ok... it's not going any further than this either way, but I'd like to know if this is as junky as it seems 
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topeira
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| Posted: Sun May 13, 2001 6:01 am |
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personally i like the sketchy look
i think your main problem is the figure's posture. especially the one on the left. he looks like he's falling and not chrging. it's hard to try and currect the posture with words but maybe if u tilt his torso more to the back.
the secod one is ok but he seems too still concidering the fact that there is a guy charging at him (or falling...). he should look more defencive in this situation, as far as i can see it
[ May 13, 2001: Message edited by: topeira ] |
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