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darkgoth junior member
Member # Joined: 26 Apr 2001 Posts: 45 Location: Houston
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 11:32 pm |
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Just finished this piece. This babe is pretty much from my head. Used a photo reference for the purposions of the body but that's it. Did her in photoshop and did the background using painter. The abract unfinished look of the background was on purpose. Tried some new brushes for her skin to give more texture. And I know, her R hand looks off. Couldn't think of how to fix it right. oh well.
here's the photo that I used for the bodies reference-
[ May 10, 2001: Message edited by: darkgoth ] |
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buyuu member
Member # Joined: 08 Jan 2001 Posts: 71 Location: Stockholm, Sweden
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 12:48 am |
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hello Natasha... Oh my. Gotta check out your website later. Mind if give a quick crit? First of, I love her face. Her eyes are intense. I think her pose is slightly wrong. Unless she is sitting on something we dont see she seems to be unbalanced to the right. Her heel should be tucked under her butt for support. Her pubic hair looks a little plastic. Maybe tone down the highlights a little? The rings are nice.
Oh,got to rush. Hope I was of help |
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Poprocksz member
Member # Joined: 08 May 2001 Posts: 497 Location: Transylvania
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 1:45 am |
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You should just put the hand flat against
the leg. And speaking of the leg.......
you should make the left leg(the one facing the person viewing the pic) a bit thinner and as well with the hips.......
Also you should fix the hair(and pubies)like
Buyuu said. Make it look more real.
still I always gotta give props to ya... |
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TheMilkMan member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 797 Location: St.Louis
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 6:29 am |
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buyuu..what the hell are you talking about..??? Do you know anatomy at all?? Don't just crit to ctit..sheesh..anyways looks great dark goth..love the figure. The only thing I see is some of the fingers on the left hand look funky..keep up the good work |
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swampbug member
Member # Joined: 18 May 2000 Posts: 401 Location: il
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 7:31 am |
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MILKMAN, Her fingers aren't the only thing that can be fixed. You implied buyuu didn;t know his anatomy. The only thing you can notice is the fingers? Come on. Buyuu is right.
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Jezebel member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2000 Posts: 1940 Location: Mesquite, TX, US
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 7:48 am |
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She's lovely
I feel the background distracts from the figure a lot though. Her lips are wonderful :>
Beth |
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buyuu member
Member # Joined: 08 Jan 2001 Posts: 71 Location: Stockholm, Sweden
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 8:30 am |
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themilkman: Yes, a little. You disagree that she is unbalanced to the right? Try sitting like that without being hunched over.. I'm pretty certain you can't. |
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Fallen member
Member # Joined: 28 Feb 2000 Posts: 298 Location: Toronto, Canada
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 5:27 pm |
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Hey Natasha.
I think I'm the only one that likes the backround...very Oliviaesque. On the girl though, I'd try and smooth out the tones some more. Also with the latex/pvc/leather, hmmm..how to put it into words...When I do it, i almost blur my eyes and just make shapes, it all looks terrible till right at the very end. It's wierd. Nice stuff though.
(edit: and send some of your models my way, i'm running short damnit. )
[ May 10, 2001: Message edited by: Fallen ] |
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