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darkgoth
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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2001 11:32 pm     Reply with quote
Just finished this piece. This babe is pretty much from my head. Used a photo reference for the purposions of the body but that's it. Did her in photoshop and did the background using painter. The abract unfinished look of the background was on purpose. Tried some new brushes for her skin to give more texture. And I know, her R hand looks off. Couldn't think of how to fix it right. oh well.
here's the photo that I used for the bodies reference-

[ May 10, 2001: Message edited by: darkgoth ]
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buyuu
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2001 12:48 am     Reply with quote
hello Natasha... Oh my. Gotta check out your website later. Mind if give a quick crit? First of, I love her face. Her eyes are intense. I think her pose is slightly wrong. Unless she is sitting on something we dont see she seems to be unbalanced to the right. Her heel should be tucked under her butt for support. Her pubic hair looks a little plastic. Maybe tone down the highlights a little? The rings are nice.
Oh,got to rush. Hope I was of help
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Poprocksz
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2001 1:45 am     Reply with quote
You should just put the hand flat against
the leg. And speaking of the leg.......

you should make the left leg(the one facing the person viewing the pic) a bit thinner and as well with the hips.......

Also you should fix the hair(and pubies)like
Buyuu said. Make it look more real.

still I always gotta give props to ya...
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TheMilkMan
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2001 6:29 am     Reply with quote
buyuu..what the hell are you talking about..??? Do you know anatomy at all?? Don't just crit to ctit..sheesh..anyways looks great dark goth..love the figure. The only thing I see is some of the fingers on the left hand look funky..keep up the good work
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swampbug
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2001 7:31 am     Reply with quote
MILKMAN, Her fingers aren't the only thing that can be fixed. You implied buyuu didn;t know his anatomy. The only thing you can notice is the fingers? Come on. Buyuu is right.

This has been Tom's "Take a Stand" for the day
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Jezebel
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2001 7:48 am     Reply with quote
She's lovely

I feel the background distracts from the figure a lot though. Her lips are wonderful :>

Beth
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buyuu
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2001 8:30 am     Reply with quote
themilkman: Yes, a little. You disagree that she is unbalanced to the right? Try sitting like that without being hunched over.. I'm pretty certain you can't.
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Fallen
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2001 5:27 pm     Reply with quote
Hey Natasha.

I think I'm the only one that likes the backround...very Oliviaesque. On the girl though, I'd try and smooth out the tones some more. Also with the latex/pvc/leather, hmmm..how to put it into words...When I do it, i almost blur my eyes and just make shapes, it all looks terrible till right at the very end. It's wierd. Nice stuff though.

(edit: and send some of your models my way, i'm running short damnit. )

[ May 10, 2001: Message edited by: Fallen ]
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