[TheSourPatchKid]

I am almost done with this piece. If any of you did not see my first time posting this piece in work in progress section let me explain.

This is an illustration for a childrens book that I am working on. Based on the Bible story of Esau and Jacob. This is their parents Isaac and Rebekah.

Tell me what you guys think.
What you think it needs.
What needs work.



thanks guys

[EviLToYLeT]

Perspective of hair on lady. You may also want to lower the belly of the girl a bit.

[TheSourPatchKid]

Your right about the hair. thanks

I think the belly is ok though.Does the belly bother you that much?

[DarkStarAngel]

I rather see that belly changed than the hair.
The belly is far too high.

[broKen craDle]

AH! Is that bible lady pinching her boob!? hehe might want to fix that

[synj]

whoa she's feeling herself up

[Ampa]

The belly IS too high! Remember that she has to fit a pair of (swollen) breats above that bump, and that the centre of the bulge will be around about her tummy button. I suggest you look at a photo for reference.

Also the guy's tunic seems some what less sharp than his wife's.

Good work none the less

Hugz Ampa

[TheSourPatchKid]

Ok guys thanks for all the comments. I still want to touch up the whole piece. I am not happy with the clothes and background yet.

Does the background bother anyone else??

Hows this?

[TheSourPatchKid]

Anyone? Do my changes work for you guys?

[stneil777]

the belly should still be lower.
look at a pregnant chick her belly would be almost about were you butt is.

[TheSourPatchKid]

That depends on how late in the pregnancy she is. And not all pregnant women carry their babies the same.

Some are higher some are lower. I think that I moved her womb down enough.
thanks though