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Axl
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 Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 10:10 am |
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Nice to have the forums back.
This is my archiologist piece, finally got around to completing it after it sat on my hard drive for some time. There are some parts that I'm not too happy with, I had a few problems getting things to look right.
Comments and crits are welcome.
Thanks.
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sacrelicious
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| Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 12:35 pm |
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| The anatomy is a bit wonky here- her head and neck seem too thick for the rest of her body. And adding a bit of color variation to the skin (especially the face) might make her seem more "alive". I like the background and the lighting effects, but I think there needs to be a stronger sense of light and shadow on the figure- she seems pretty evenly lit, considering she's inside an ancient temple. But good job overall, and I really like your unique style. |
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