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digistyle junior member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2001 Posts: 13 Location: Cleveland, Ohio, USA
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AoD junior member
Member # Joined: 04 May 2001 Posts: 28 Location: Marietta, GA
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 8:46 pm |
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Looks good, bro. The only thing I have to complain about is the lines. You use such soft shading, yet really hard lines. I'd reccommend softening up the lines a bit, particularly around her face and chest. Other than that, it looks good. |
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shahar2k member
Member # Joined: 01 Jun 2000 Posts: 867 Location: Oak Park CA USA
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 10:11 pm |
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he's right about the lines, except not entirely, the lines seem so hard because they have no variation, they are completely flat, what you should try if you want to keep them in is to vary the thickness of the lines to put weight on certain parts, I find that if you use thicker lines where parts meet, or when there's a sharp angle, and thinner lighter lines when they are long, or there's a slow curve it makes the drawing much easier to look at |
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swampbug member
Member # Joined: 18 May 2000 Posts: 401 Location: il
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 10:24 pm |
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Positive: Face structure is very unique. I get a whole different feeling of human-ness looking at her face. Simple and easy.
Constructive: GIRL WITH GUN. THATS what I see. You might as well throw a lens flare in there while you're at it.
You aren't the only one who's done this girl with gun combo. ITS CLICHE as the word itself. Something origial please !
-tom |
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