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Seagull
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Location: Tel Aviv, Israel
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 Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2001 2:51 am |
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Hey,
An illustration for a poem.
pencil, ink, photoshop, and some scanned water color textures.
--sea
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TheSourPatchKid
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Location: Ohio usa
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| Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2001 2:26 pm |
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What the heck is she siting on?
I would like it more if the text didnt clash so much with the painting.
For some reason this painting makes me feal sick to my stomach. It just creeps me out a litle (i didnt mean to put down your art work)
Its just really weird with the naked woman with the bright red boots? Fishing on what looks like some huge modern art scuplture made out of chocolate or something.
It just looks really painful to sit on something like that let alone if you naked.
Keep working on it. Get referefence on rocks and ocean and human anatomy. |
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Seagull
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Location: Tel Aviv, Israel
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| Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 2:19 am |
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| TheSourPatchKid : Hey! I like it that you think it's weird. it is a weird poem, with crazy imagery - so it's nice I was able to convey it. Yes, there is something wrong with the anatomy of the legs - as topeira told me - i should fix it. |
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