[Swami]

[chip_artz]

In the 1st pic the horse looks really good but the persons facial anatomy is off. Try some reference or life drawing to take yourself to a higher level. The second pic is pretty good but the legs look odd maybe if you try to define them give em a realistic shape. Hope that helps. It's hard to get responses around here when you're new, it seems that a lot of people only post @ a select few peoples posts.

[Lennox]

Here's some basic guidelines I drew up using a mouse. From my perspective, the top lip needs to move over to stay centered with the rest of the pic. The left eye needs to be rotated down a little so it's the same angle as the other eye. Also the whole left side of the face needs to be shifted down a little. The right side of the face looks good in my opinion. I don't think you should mess with it. Just try to get the left side to match it in perspective.