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Myself · Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2001 12:19 am

Hello I am a new guy on this site, so I am now collecting critz for my newly created pic.
thanks

Kazz · member Member # Joined: 24 Mar 2001 Posts: 126

Nice tits you got, I wouldn't like to mess with him!!
Nice colors you have.
Great understanding of anatomy.
Nice lighting too.

One thing, there’s a basic rule for the position of the eyes, the space between the eyes = one eye length.

Hope that helps

-Kazz

ForgottenDavey · Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2001 12:36 am

That's pretty cool. Just one thing. The dudes body looks 3d but his face looks pretty flat. If you can round out his face I think you'll have a pretty good pic.
Happy painting.

Myself · Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2001 12:45 am

I am working on it.
thanks

maybe I should continue the downtown of the barbarian, dont't you think?

Lateralus · Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2001 1:20 am

very cool pic, but the hair doens't look quite right as it comes down over his shoulder... just a thought.

mellowsmoothe · Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2001 8:26 am

i think the lighting on his face is a little to much. it makes it seem as if his face doesn't go with his body. from the neck down he looks good though. ouch!!! all those tatts...

Awetopsy · Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2001 8:30 am

looks good dude.. keep at it.

darkgoth · Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2001 1:05 pm

yah- face looks a little off from the rest of the body and the black shading around the hair needs to be lighted or blended more. Smug tool man, smug tool- WORKS wonders! But other than that- the chest looks really good and nice shading work on it.

Jucas · Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2001 10:12 pm

Here's what I think:
It is a very good image. Great colors and idea. The things I don't like are the lighting and his tatoos. Here are my suggestions-
I think part of the reason his face looks flat is how the light is hitting it. When I look at the picture, I see and artificial light (almost like a fricken

hologen) shinning right into his face out of nowhere. Tone it down. OR even make it much darker with another interesting tone. Perhaps even through in another color for variety.

About his tatoos. They seem so simple. I think they should be much more intricite.

take it or leave it, hope something i said helps.
-jon

[ April 26, 2001: Message edited by: Jucas ]

Myself · Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2001 11:53 pm

Hi

Thanks for all your help. I have a long weekend now, so I will try to fix the mistakes and put the picure back at wednesday.

One thing I don't agree: a barbarian is not an artist, he can only make tatoos like this, but maybe I can? ��.......

Myself · Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2001 1:44 am

Good weekend for everyone!!!!

Myself · Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2001 3:58 am

Some pause between the hard work. Some of the mistakes has been repaired. Do anyone has an idea about the tattoo-s?