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Cos
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 Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 5:44 pm |
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The usual cheery subject matter! 
There's alot I don't like about this one so any crits to help improve it are appreciated, cheers.
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Skeezer
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 6:16 pm |
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I really like the texture on the guys skin.
Where is the light coming from?
As far as problems, the anatomy of the victim's head could use a little work. I would start by pushing his eyes futher back under the brow, and also increasing the size of his cranium, there should be quite a bit more mass back there.
The girl's face looks good, but the lighting seems to bright. It looks like its lit seperately from the other two characters.
Hope that helps. The composition looks great.
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Dthind
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 8:34 pm |
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Different... Her look is not totally of horror, interesting... though...
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Snake Grunger
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 10:07 pm |
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Hrmm, don't know if it's supposed to be better or not..  You tell me.
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2001 12:03 am |
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Nice cos. Snake grunger did a decent job i guess (better than i could do) the problems he fixed as far as i can see are the perspetive of the fingers on the monster and the first person and the graps. The red eyes on the monster.. makes for a more interesting picture if you'd ask me. One thing that I find a bit odd is the perspective on the faces snake fixed it up a bit, but he also changed the skin color.
You may want to change the skin color back to get the pale fear tpetrified look. Great going though! I espsecially like the background. |
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DiXter
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| Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2001 2:25 am |
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Wow, I really like your picture!
But if i were you i would change the skin color on the girl so that she would look more alive. That should create the feeling that the creature sucking the life out of that guy..
But thats me..
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Ax0
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| Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2001 2:52 am |
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Cool pic.
U know what would be cool. The victim's head could be detailed with veins. U know. That grasp looks SO powerful, that the blood circulation must have some problems.
Now that would be cool, then again not :P
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Cos
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| Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2001 3:45 am |
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forgot to reply to this in all the new forum commotion, Thanks to those who
replied. I'm not happy with the peoples faces on the right and some other
stuff too, need some more painting practise I guess.
Snake Grunger - its more exxagerated/cartoony then what I wanted but I see what
you are getting at with it. I might make the woman behind his head instead of
peeoping over his shoulder like you did tho, think I prefer that.
[ April 23, 2001: Message edited by: Cos ] |
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