[Akolyte]

jpeg compression sux, but I don't participate here too often, so I decided to post him:



[This message has been edited by Akolyte (edited April 03, 2001).]

[Mitch.C]

looks cool but the thumb on the left looks weird. It looks cut off.

[BooMSticK]

I love pencils too!
Your drawing need some tightning up. Although most of your shading is pretty nice you still need to define the lightsource better. Theres no reason to only have the hard shadow under the character. Other areas need to be in deep shadow too to get a better feeling of form and depth. Use all values of grey from bright white to dark black. Also your anatomy is a bit off for most parts...
,Boom