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Symo
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Enjoy! Aria (c) Avalon Studiom, Angela (c) TMP. Draw by Jay Anacleto, color by "Symo"
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topeira
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| Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 1:04 am |
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the lineart is totally cool!
but i think the coloring could have been better. i think it lacks stronger highlights and shading. it's too flat and counts on the artline. the b.G looks like just 2 colors and that is not interesting enough and confusing... i am not sure about what to do with the BG....
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Symo
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| Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 1:09 am |
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| The background is a base with 2 color. I worked on the two characthers. Critique 'em not the back please. |
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n8
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| Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 4:45 am |
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dood...gotta love that line work...actually...i think i saw the dood that draws aria at comicfest here in sydney...nywho...with your colours, i think you gotta make the shiny bits shinier...it looks like youre just using flat colours set on a multiply layer and colouring it. and letting the linework and shading do the rest...more shinies!!...but its a good start
cheers..
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@TRoX
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| Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2001 9:06 am |
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| Not bad at all, but you should use more light spots in your picture for more contrast and a not so "flat" look! But when it comes down to it just good work! |
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Roy Fielding
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| Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 2:37 am |
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Love that drawing and I quite like the colouring style too. However, there's something niggling me about the face of the woman on the right. It looks like the head is drawn in profile, but the face is angled towards the viewer? If you cover the face with your hand or a piece of paper, you will see that the head is side on and not turned slightly.
That's my only crit to this othewise nice piece.
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