[Axl]

Not the film but a diver.
I was thinking of putting in some sort of sea demon/beast in shadow somewhere behind her, like a larger version of the black spirits in my previous post for anyone that saw it.
Tell me what you think, comments and crits welcome.
Thanks.

[Psionic]

This pic is very interesting, simple linework, yet detailed shading, I really like it, could definately do with a big silouhette type creature in the background!!!

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[roundeye]

first thing i noticed was the wrists seem a little too thick.

[topeira]

the thing that bothered me the most is that the head and lower arms are waaay to thick. if that was the intension for some reason than leave it but she seemed like a man cuz of this. also the chin is too close to the nose and the shadow above the collar bones is too dark (cuz i can't see a shadow casted by the head on the chest and shoulders).

besides that this in a pretty piece. i LOVE the shading and the water above.

now, when i look at it again, her right hand seems like it holding the spear wrong. i should be able to see more of the back of her hand from this angle.

good work. keep it up

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[Axl]

Updated this last night.
Fixed the wrists and added some shafts of sunlight and the sea beast.

Psionic: Thanks
roundeye: fixed the wrists
topeira: I guess the head might be too thick but she is wearing a mask, although I've just noticed that her neck is a little thick aswell, damn!