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Samson & Friends
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 1:47 am     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 1:50 am     Reply with quote
very real.

a bit too bright though. i think u could give it a more defined\interesting light direction, not just a frontal top light. that should give u better shadows and contrasts.

very pretty on top of that

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 3:43 am     Reply with quote
Thankyou for your comment topeira.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 11:57 am     Reply with quote
very nicely done.. it is bright.. could be a little more contrasty.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 4:15 pm     Reply with quote
Great picture...so are you a guy or a girl?
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 8:57 pm     Reply with quote
haha
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 9:16 pm     Reply with quote
the hair could be a little less blury... but very nice overall

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Dreaming of that face again.
It's bright and blue and shimmering.
Grinning wide
And comforting me with it's three warm and wild eyes.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 11:55 pm     Reply with quote
Arnt portraits a pain? You can never get good enough I think. I still beat myself up doing portraits.

Maybe its me but I think the ears are a little low on your head.

Repost an update

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