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Elijah · Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2001 7:57 pm

This is just a self portrait.

crits encouraged

[This message has been edited by Elijah (edited March 23, 2001).]

Dthind · member Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 436

I like where this is going. The face has emotion. The 'jacket' seems to need a little help with definition, perhaps.

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vector · Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2001 8:42 pm

I like it

yes the jacket needs some more detail and less blurry

fish guy = awesome

tayete · Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2001 12:46 am

That head is astonishing!!!

jasonN · Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2001 2:28 am

Great pic!

However, I agree with the others, fixing up his lower half would make it even better.
-Jason

Elijah · Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2001 4:01 am

Hey wow thanks alot guys. YEah I agree too, but haven't been able to figre outwhat to do with the texture of his jacket, should it be thick and rubbery, like a leather or maybe a thick Linen or somthing?

topeira · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2001 1:56 am

it doesn't fucking matter, man. just add some wrinkles and folds to teh jacket and end it!

great pic. awsome head!

it reminds me of the scene where yoda stood in the forest in episode IV i think.

i think u should add details to the BG. keep it blurry but add more than just darker stripes.

good job

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