[phob]

hi, i did this woman here, only for fun..
I inked in the computer with a tablet, and it's not that easy... so the lines are not so good :P
I don't no if it's good enough to you, but if you want to color it, I would appreciate . For the full-res version just take off the "-low" from the address

[Dthind]

You may want to add a little more detail, before asking for coloring (IMHO).

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[Spring]

You should correct your anatomy too. I drew this quick sketch for you hoping it will help.
The main thing is that her breasts look like they're just hanging there like two enormous water balloons. And they overlap each other, which normally would never happen. Unless you are drawing them from a different angle. In fact, normal breast never touch each other unless they are majorly pushed together by a special bra.
Another thing was the hair. All of the spikes in the hair should be going the same way. If you want to ever have a curl going upwards then it should look like the curl in the picture with the arrow pointing to it.

[A.Buttle]

Her breasts look like a butt and her legs are disproportionate.

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[phob]

thanks for the feedback guys
i made the repairs you said


[This message has been edited by phob (edited March 24, 2001).]

[Spring]

Looking a little bit better. The neck should be longer. And the breasts are set like you are viewing them from the front. They should look like you are viewing them from the side.
Breasts are very very hard to draw. Try to think of them as being two circles and then try to shape them around that. Your last breasts look a lot better than the first attempt so you are imrpoving Keep it up