Sijun Forums :: View topic - first piece of finished anime, PLEASE CRIT!

Fafnir · Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 9:38 pm

I am proud of this piece, because it is the first one I have done. Followed the photoshop colouring thing at jdillion.net
love that page. anyways, PLEASE crit

http://www.angelfire.com/hi3/omen/corinthian.html

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"I wanna go to bovine university when I grow up!"
-Ralph Wiggum

Fafnir · Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 7:53 pm

crap...I'm THAT bad eh?

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"I wanna go to bovine university when I grow up!"
-Ralph Wiggum

OreoX · Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 7:56 pm

dude, you make me look good
j/k LOL

Fafnir · Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 8:55 pm

thought so
you're welcome ^_^

u2art · Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2001 9:24 pm

hey, nice, but you definitely need more practice...but NEVER get discouraged!!!

Line weight is too even and nervous. It is really flat and cartoony...although that isnt bad,

It is VERY simple, so it looks like it was done fast, but if you arent that experienced it could take a while

You need a more definite light source

Draw...the drawing is ok, but the drawing is where it all starts, coloring only adds to that.

use reference, if you didnt...at least till you are a master...which takes many many years.

keep practicing, as long as you learn something from every picture, you will always improve, and its better to start as early as posible.

Nicolaides said that we all have 5,000 bad drawings in us, better to get them out early. or is it 10,000...either way its aLOT!

Take care, and keep posting for crit

Art