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SporQ
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 Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 8:21 am |
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crit, comment, whatever.
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Al_kgs
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| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 9:32 am |
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Since he uses a magical glowing staff, i suppose there isnt much ambient light. Thus i think shadows should be much darker...
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Enayla
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| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 3:45 pm |
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Mm... Soft, nice, gentle colours. That's sweet.
I think a little more contrast in some places would improve the picture, though. But then again, that'd take away from the softness - which I like, so I don't know... 
The hand holding the staff needs some serious work though... there's something weird going on there...
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topeira
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| Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 12:07 am |
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i think i must comment on the same thing as the others -
need darker shadows. i looks like he is using th staff in a place that is not really dark anyway. other than this and the fact that the hand needs more work, it's good. real nice.
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