[Luke_de_Sade]

Her breasts look a bit awkward.

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[zenonithus]

She has a distinguished look to her. The face is good as with most of the drawing, but the breasts look a little awkward. You should show some cleavage or something to initiate the shape from the dress to the skin. And the nipples should have more of an outward offset. As for your color scheme it's good, but it looks like you have used too much black or over use of the burn tool. Try to shade via painting different shades of the same color, though use the dodge and burn in conjunction. Also try smudging and blending the edges and play around with your outlines. Use smudge on the hair along with dodge and burn. You get some really good results. Good anatomy. Mabey the right (my right) shoulder is thinner then the other. Try beefing it out a bit to match the left.

zenon

[Tittle]

I think the reason that the one arm seems thinner is that it is because her torso is supposed to be tilted. However the rendering of the breasts and angle of the shoulders does not lend to that. If you fixed the breasts and the shoulder angle to match that arm you'd have an intersting pose to match you nice work

[Keto]

i have a slow connection . the brests popped up and i almost choked on my tongue and died. not to be offensive. i was just not expecting the perfect spheres and completely erect nipples by the expression on her face.

[anso]

Here comes another girl!! :)
I�m still not use do draw with colours but I�m trying!!
Please comment. :)





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anso

[Nanimo]

real nice. just as the last one =)
i like the look on her face ^_^
well. i like it =)

[absinthe]

why exactly is the dress transparent enough on her breasts to see her nipples, but not transparent anywhere else on the body?

you've got a lot of potential. keep working.