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phiger
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 Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2001 11:06 pm |
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opps! this is my wallpaper
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Collosimo
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| Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 2:37 am |
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Hi, my first comment would be... Make the image smaller so that it doesnt take ppl with low b/width 5 minutes! aaahhh...
Visually appealing... nice ideas.
I think in terms of Graphic Design... that sure there are elements of it that are true to the Title 'Konfusion' but generally the symmetry and repetition in the work to me suggests quite the opposite of 'Konfusion'.
I think that your overall composition needs to 'be more confusing'... However be very careful not to take it into 'Chaos'. I think that the part of your work that is true to the title would be the photo arrangments on the side. They are indeed confusing, and furthermore they are still identifiable and relate to each other. They are confusing, but not in chaos. I think that you need to establish the same principles across your whole piece.
Very promising ideas you have and I think that with some more work this could be really quite a nice wallpaper.
Hope that helps.
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Collosimo
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| Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 2:39 am |
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AHA! sorry... just noticed the 'Organised Confusion' text.
maybe thats why it is symmetrical! if so then maybe you should add the organised bit to the whole title.
oh and btw, I'm an Aussie too! 
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