[Enayla]

Been working on this for a while, just a side-project. I was about to start smoothening it, when I remembered that everyone seems to like my work rough instead... so... here it is. I know the background is very separate from her and not at all integrated with her person... but this is really mostly a character portrait.



And now I'm feeling very tired and very sick... better sneak off to bed.


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[travis travis]

Pretty.

(I am also tired. G'night.)

[Shaded]

Sleep easy sugah. Nice pitcha, Ill comment after a couple more people drop some input.

[Bishop_Six]

It looks good, but the perspective of her breasts seems kinda messed. heh... breast, messed. it rhymes... ummm... sorry

[ReSistanZ]

Hi, I am (like all those others on this board) a huge fan of yours (and your work , or maybe only your work ). But I am one of a few maybe who likes the other style more than this rough style.
I am actually NOT saying I don't like this style, heheh. I love all your work.

About this peace: I just love the hair (especially those shiny dots).
My crit is that her left breast should be hanging around now, since her bra stops at a certain point instead of going up to her shoulder like on her right side.

[SlightlyTwisted]

Wow.

--insert the usual praise here--

I'm thinking her head might be a tad large for her body. Maybe. I could be mistaken.

I, for one, like the background. And her eyes, of course, and her lips too. Oh, and her ears!

[Blitz]

Always Beautifull stuff. The Hair...DAMN...

So good. How many landscap Pics have you drawn..Just curious..I remember one and it was awsome.

Well Keep in touch..

Blitz

[Eric Pommer]

I really like the atmosphere and colour of this one. I second the motion that her head seems a little too large...I think that would go away if you extended the left hand shoulder back into the shadow under her hair a bit more.
Love the 'lost' expression!


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[SporQ]

im going to have to go against the crowd on this one and say that it's not too good. it's certainly got you look too it, but i think the original layout of the sketch falls short on a couple points.

first, the anatomy is quite off. her head is way too big and her body lacks some depth. also, where the neck meets the body is kinda off =\ the face is nice though.

perspective. you're right, the background doesnt go at all. its in a totally different perspective than she is.

lighting. again, the background has a different light source than she does. also, on her, most of the light is subdued and it looks filtered. but, her hair has a ton of contrast, and it jump out. that makes it look unnatural and sorta like it was pasted on afterwords.

sorry if this is kinda rough on you, but it's just what i see. just chalk it up to having a bad day, i think you're better than this peice shows.

SporQ

[PandaX52]

the side of the face facing you looks good with the unsmoothed lines, sort of adds texture, but not too much...especially around the cheek and forehead.

[topeira]

even though the breast seem to high and point to much towards the viewer and the eyes are not on the same hight and a lil off the pic is very nice.

and i can see u took the last crit ppl gave u into concideration. i like your skatchy style to but i still can't help to wonder how will this pic look smoothened...

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[Jenn]

Nice work. Tho i think there is too much change between the looks on this piece..


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[faustgfx]

where's that one drawing that looks like me? =)

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