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NeroN · Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2001 11:35 pm

While working in French animation studio back when....Ed--

Ko · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2001 12:06 am

That has to be the most disproportionate work I have ever seen... I wouldnt want a girl with a waist like that.

Nice drawing technique though

Ko

topeira · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2001 12:06 am

i think the breasts are a lil too big proportionally speaking.

j\k

great lineart. very good.

2 things - i'm missing her left hand and the stomach is a lil weird...

i think something in that direction could be better if u work on it.

oh, and i'd love to see it colored. any chance for that to happen?

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coil_weevil · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2001 12:12 am

hhehehe...those tits....really cool linework btw. I'n thinking Who Framed Rodger Rabbit or Cool World....proportion wise anyhow.

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TheMilkMan · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2001 12:14 am

It is cool and wired at the same time...man it would look a lot better with a more realistic waise...or maybe even not so lumpy??

MeatyCheesyBoy · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2001 8:49 am

I like the line work alot. I don't mind the waist size. It kind of reminds me of Sam Keith's Julie Winters in The MAXX. (The proportions and only kind of) What I don't really like is the line that makes the top of the bum. At looks a little sharp in the back. But good work. Post more.

balistic · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2001 9:28 am

I love the way you drew her midsection. . . . tight work as usual Ed.

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Ed Lee · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2001 9:32 am

Hey Topeira,
Yeah, most people don't care for the waist but I wanted to really push all the proportions - her being on the cartoony side. Also,I left out the other arm because I really wanted to showcase her waist, and the arm would just clutter up that area - though I guess I can lift it up and away or something. Ed--

kombosagi · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2001 2:37 pm

I like it, don't tone it down or make it more proportional it'll look like every other pic i see all the time

frostfyre · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2001 10:51 pm

I like it! It reminds me of the stuff from the batman shows, crossed with tank girl

Stylization is a good thing. As one of the other posters ponted out, there's already a LOT of realisticaly proportioned pinups and paintings being done.

That said, the only bit that strikes me as truly odd is how, um, horizontal her butt is...

Keep up the nice work!

Lomi · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2001 12:11 am

omfg my forearm is bigger around than her waist! if she bent over too far she'd snap in half!

Totuus · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2001 1:17 am

I think the whole pic looks good, and i think that the tomach fits to the picture, it creates some style..
I like the hand the most.

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