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Ahcri
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These drawings are done for a Baldur's Gate II site. Comments?
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PandaX52
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| Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 5:48 pm |
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| your anatomy looks ok, try cleaning up your lines a bit, scanned pencil right? Clean lines are goood....mmmmmm..... |
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MD-02-Geist
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| Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 6:02 pm |
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i like them ... the first one has a good dynamic and the armor of the knight looks very good... the torso looks very detailed but i miss this a bit in the legs. Give it more detail and will look great.
But good work anyway...
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| Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 6:56 pm |
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First guy seems fine.
Second guy looks like he's wearing baggy pants instead of armor. you might consider having the knee pieces overlap the leg pieces instead of the other way around. Also, double edged swords don't have points like that, because they'd be very brittle. japanese swords have points like that, but have a thick back edge which keeps the tip strong. Not saying it's a major deal, people draw 'em that way all the time, just mentioning what I noticed.
-matt
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Ahcri
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| Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 11:14 pm |
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Good points, I'll try to change them. Thanks
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Lomi
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| Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 12:18 am |
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not that bad, the first guy looks like he's in a strange battle pose though, if he were in battle he would be leaving his left side wide open for attack and his feet look (pardon my french) f*cked.
as for the second one good job, although you should add more detail to the face |
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