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Topic : "Soldier from the dark... [plz critique]" |
MD-02-Geist
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 Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 5:17 pm |
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I tried to give this pic some more life with the used lightning.
I know there cant be seen that much details, but that makes him more mysterious (and thats how he is supposed to be)....
but this is my first experiment like this so i need a bit critique plz.
and here the more lighted version of it...
Thx for every critique...
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[This message has been edited by MD-02-Geist (edited March 01, 2001).] |
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PandaX52
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| Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 5:42 pm |
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not too shabby, i think maybe adding some highlights in a lighter green on the suit and maybe adding some sort of refletion sort in the visor would be nifty...
the plain blue visor looks outt'a place and could add a lot to the pic if you made it a bit more visually complex... |
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MD-02-Geist
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 5:52 am |
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No more critique???? 
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Joachim
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 6:39 am |
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the character looks good. But, I think you could need some more overall lightsetting so that the characters shape gets clearer. It's a bit to much contrasts and sheded area that makes it a bit unclear for the eye.
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