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Ed Lee
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 1:20 am     Reply with quote
Excuse the long vertical format..but I've always like Gustav Klimt's work and he seemed to do the same...Critz are welcome.. Ed--



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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 1:59 am     Reply with quote
Klimt rules. I really like your picture too. very clean.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 2:08 am     Reply with quote
Sweet...i like this version as well. I prefer the hair and face of the original girlie tho. =) Too bad you can't post that version....sux.

I dig her boots....

Hahahaha, she looks like a hooker in the year 2251, servicing the hard working men slaving away 18 hours a day gathering super-active CB-4 gas from the planet Treno-B. .....sorry....i'm in the middle of drawing...hahah....too much coffe...

-feng
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 2:33 am     Reply with quote
The only crit I can make is that she's preferred to inhabit your brain and not mine.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 2:38 am     Reply with quote
mr.lee

you and mr.feng both sure have developed really great rendering styles. and the marker studies are so fresh. i both envy and aspire.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 3:10 am     Reply with quote
Ha ha.. Feng. This version is definitely more sleazy than the "other" version. -wink- Ah well.. Man, my eyes are all bugging out from playing that damn DreamCast game..watz it? Le Mans racing game? Yeah, I'm all coffeed out too! Hmmm..you got that whole sci-fi sleaze scenario going with this sketch. So, when you gonna post your futuristic chick? I hope soon..I'm all embarrased now...ha hee..yeah right... Ed--



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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 3:10 am     Reply with quote
Hmmm, this is the gallery forum so you probably aren't looking for crits, but I have a couple: To me, the forehead is too tall, and the ass is to small. It's plenty round and perky, but seems like it should be a little longer vertically. Other than that, this is really great Ed.

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Ed Lee
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 3:27 am     Reply with quote
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Originally posted by sacrelicious:
To me, the forehead is too tall, and the ass is to small. It's plenty round and perky, but seems like it should be a little longer vertically.

OK..I don't want to sound too chauvanistic with the ladies in the audience - but your point is well taken. Anyway, I guess it's a personal preference that I like tall foreheads in women. As for the butt..yeah, I didn't want to make it too big ya know... Ed--




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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 7:26 am     Reply with quote
Hehe, what i really like is the angular style of the clothes, this very cool.
oh. and you better listen to Feng and post the original girlie

~bizarde
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 7:36 am     Reply with quote
Great drawing, very sleazy - but thats the point - The only thing that worries me is that slightly receding hairline (personal pref). Love the rest tho!

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 7:44 am     Reply with quote
*Ahem* So when do I get to draw like this?

-Ian

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 10:14 am     Reply with quote
very well executed drawing. good mature lines you exibit.
so you're a fan of the german symbolists. good choice.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 2:48 pm     Reply with quote
Nice clean sketch. Really sharp, defined shading. Her ass and legs have Shirow/Manga stlye proportions. I heard that tall forheads on women suggests high intelligence or something. Is the original available for viewing?
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Ed Lee
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 3:14 pm     Reply with quote
Eh? Original for viewing..ah..not for awhile - I do have to respect their NDA. Tall foreheads...and shiny bum.... Uh? Shirow/Manga style proportions? Hmmm...To accentuate and create contrast/tension between upper and lower half - I exaggerated the skinny yet shapely bottom and ballooned out the jacket is all. Ed--

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 3:46 pm     Reply with quote
Nice drawing, I like the boots a lot.

One crit though, Her butt looks kinda too small....
nice work

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 7:03 pm     Reply with quote
ED....damn man that looks good...so that is the legendary g-string girl huh...your pencil works remins me of some excomic book guys I work with.....her boot design is great post more man cant get enough of your work!
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 9:01 pm     Reply with quote
Actually, this is not the original g-string girl. That one I can't post yet..Hell, I think Feng's going to post some of his own G-girls. Ed--
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 9:44 pm     Reply with quote
What is it that you're working that you can't show us the picture? Or is that included in your non-disclosure agreement?

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 11:51 pm     Reply with quote
Somekind of game stuff...Ed--
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2001 12:21 am     Reply with quote
i dont think it looks that sleazy!
anyways... thats really great rendering and i hope that some day i can draw that well...


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2001 12:34 am     Reply with quote
Gut evening.
I like this girlie because she has a bottom. What a nice round shiny bum she has. I cant wait to see it coloured in. Is that markers you use? I think her bum will be red.

BUTT HOLD ON! ;-)
will her rosy posterior not get a tad chilly? Her nice 80's jacket will keep her knockers warm but her butt...
Also I think her hair need wash
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2001 8:38 am     Reply with quote
You fellas should get a colorist to color all of your concept sketches and then ya'll could just crack out sketches. hint hint

I want to see the other g-string girl.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2001 4:44 pm     Reply with quote
Got ya.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 6:55 am     Reply with quote
i love it. i'd marry it (hell yea!)

i'm sure, ed lee, that u know what seems out of scale or something and i know it was intensionally (i read your post) and it looks just like u wanted it to be and i think it's excellent! great figure. i'd like the butt to be a lil longer vertically but still freakin' cool.



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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 11:54 am     Reply with quote
I gone and fucked up your image becuase iam so damn bored
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 2:27 pm     Reply with quote
Way cool. I like the texture of the hair, different, but very nice.

*ponders, wow those are cool boots, wonder if wife would where them...hmmm....Hold on Back To reality....*
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 10:57 am     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 10:35 pm     Reply with quote
very nice man, you can almost see her lighting up a cigarette after that pic
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