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Leo
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eheheh... some funny mechanical stuff inspired by forum picture... sure it was Loki.
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ime
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 6:57 am |
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wow
very good landscape
nice design
maybe you should try that zep from a different angle?
owh.. nice clouds btw |
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Daijoobu
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 7:24 am |
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Ooohh
This is awesome!
very cool design on the "zeppelin" -thingy.
I especially like the little lights in the canyon. |
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SporQ
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 8:01 am |
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wow, that canyon kicks ass. the zepplin is an awesome design too, but it sorta looks like it was pasted on top as an after-thought. i would suggest turning it toward the viewer to add perspective/depth. make it follow the line of the canyon.
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MunkY c mUnkY Du
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 10:04 am |
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| yeah maybe the zeppelin coming towards the viewer a bit more... but that is FookING awesome... good work |
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Rick
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 10:10 am |
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This is really cool.
The zeppelin's design reminds me of Fifth Element styled transportation. |
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Cos
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 10:28 am |
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| shit man that looks frakkin good! you painted over 3d or from scratch?? how about posting some of your inprogress steps if you have any. |
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Ian
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 10:28 am |
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That is sheer beauty. If I could paint like that I would be happy to die and go to heaven... *sigh*
oh well... back to realidad.
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Joachim
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 1:09 pm |
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very nice. The background is great...love that crack down in the rock.
crits, I think that zeppelin is nicely designed. Only thing could be to work a bit on it's perspective, because you kind of get the feeling that the ship is totally in side view, it could be good to get more and more underperspective on it.
Also, the lights, if you make some more smaller lights, and not let them get glow or totall brightness, you will get a much better feel of scale. Here's what i mean, though, veeery quickly so i don't think I managed to illustrate it well enough, but atleast look at what I ment with the lights and see if you agree ?... click here
but, great work !
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wayfinder
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| Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 12:18 am |
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kickass. the canyon is super good.
if i was you, i'd check the clouds again, they seem to have a strange angle compared to the ground. looks like the ground plane and the cloud plane collide before the actual horizon. if you paint the clouds higher, and the zeppelin more from below (I probably couldn't do it  ), the vastness will be even more disturbing, i think.
anyways, fantastic.
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[This message has been edited by wayfinder (edited February 17, 2001).] |
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Horg
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| Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 12:38 am |
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Hey that's pretty cool !!! I really like the design in the zeppelin. One thing you could do is add a subtle backlight, like the light emited from a moon of some sort, it would add a lot of details on the side of the zeppelin and make it more 3D i think...
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topeira
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| Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 5:34 am |
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WOW.
*mouth wide open*
good shit!! totally.
not a bad comment.
two questions - what programm did u use to do this? looks like photoshop. currect?
2)where is LOKI to say a thing or two cuz u, loki, also got something to do with zeppelins 
please post more soon, leo!
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 5:51 am |
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good stuff. now draw it at 2048x1536 god damnit.
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Sempere
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| Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 6:27 am |
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Yep!
I like the mood and dessing a lot !
But I think that it�s a too planar image.
It only needs add some drama changing the camera...
Good work! |
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Leo
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| Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 6:35 pm |
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Heya guys!
Thanks for all the crits! Much appreciated!
v1510nAry: hehe dude, i've said before this pict was inspired by Loki's post... and i remember the oilcity well.
faustgfx: mmm... why?
topeira: yes, it's photoshop. I prefer Painter for now but i'd like to switch to ps from time to time. And yeees zeppelins is a favourite loki's theme hehe... i can't resist.
Joachim: you're totally right - the smaller lights/glows makes this hull really HUGE. I like the 'repaint' you've done... got some ideas.
Horg: aaargh... these ideas comes too late!
wayfinder: thanks man! Everything is strange in the pict cuz i didn't checkup some important things. And don't it tell to everyone - i was too lazy to build a simple 3d reference  .
Ian: good boyz goto heaven bad boyz goto London nevermind...
Cos: no 3d there... just a crappy scratch. Sorry man, i didn't have any in-progress picts. The process is kinda Mechwarrior spotlight i've done for gameart.
SporQ: thx! I promise to do some research before painting.
-leo
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| Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 7:33 pm |
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my jaw dropped when i saw this pic!!
i do agree that the zep could use a different view. |
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Seph|roth
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| Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 9:22 pm |
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Really good work on this one Leo.
I opened this thread not really knowing what to expect, I was surprised to see such an awesome painting !
The only crit which was mentionned before as well, is the perspective, which seems a lil weird..
Thats all ! Great job !
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| Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 11:22 pm |
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Sweet!
Nice work Leo. I love the clouds.
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| Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 3:57 am |
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| wow. Everything I wanted to say has already been said, just 'wow'. |
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 6:13 am |
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leo: wallpaper purposes
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| Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 6:36 pm |
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grrrrrrr screw you man your too damn god man o man ...and i was in love at first site....lemme find the words
...WoW
grrrr i should be able to delete my own posts...sigh sorry for the double up nice pic man really enjoy it
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Krazy
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| Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 6:38 pm |
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grrrrrrrr screw you man you too damned good ...and at first site i fell in love..wait a moment whiles i finds the right words...
...WoW |
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| Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 6:51 pm |
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I like it...now you're talking my language.  As I look though, the lower two side arching panels seem exactly the same height, perhaps you can break up the "line" so it doesn't looked cloned. Don't misunderstand me
I git critz too, and it's just very minor. The split mountain in da background rocks! Good lighting too.  Ed-- |
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| Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 10:07 pm |
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THat's a great one, Leo - just found it ...
The reason why the Zeppelin doesn't seem to be totally integrated is the lack of athmospheric prespective (haze).
I kinda can see that you were inspired by 'Oil City' ... I feel honored - your image is great! Kind of a shame that the Zeppelin takes the attention away from that awesome canyon in the lower right ...
Right on, doooood! |
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| Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 11:59 am |
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That is so cool! Great detail.
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| Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2001 12:37 am |
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| Awesome work Leo! |
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Leo
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| Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2001 6:09 pm |
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thx guys!
Loki: agreed - i have only a bit of practice so this is another reason why i still here
Ed: no prob with critz no matter how "cool" pict can be. zep design were done spontaneous
faust: ok but wait... you've 2048x1536 screen res ?! :0
[edit] smiles problem [/edit]
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| Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2001 6:38 pm |
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| Very nice stuff! |
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